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  • A Good Story, but some more development would have helped

    By Lovestoread32
    I liked the story, ideas, and family ties. The way the author wrote was a bit confusing, though. It seemed like she could have added some more information, dialogue, scenes, character development, etc. For the first few chapters I was confused about who “the major” was vs. Jace, and what had really happened there. It didn’t help that there were a lot of characters, and there wasn’t always an explanation of who they were or their relationship. Also, many of the female character turned out to have names like Arlo, Shane, Tucker, Tanner, Alex, Sam, and it took awhile to figure out who they were.
  • Garbage

    By harbajan singh
    No like
  • Fun, Moral, Western Culture, Adult

    By Very Happy Apple Customer
    Like the military and cowboy cultures mixed, and beautifully described during the course of the story.

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