A Good Story, but some more development would have helped
By Lovestoread32
I liked the story, ideas, and family ties. The way the author wrote was a bit confusing, though. It seemed like she could have added some more information, dialogue, scenes, character development, etc. For the first few chapters I was confused about who “the major” was vs. Jace, and what had really happened there. It didn’t help that there were a lot of characters, and there wasn’t always an explanation of who they were or their relationship. Also, many of the female character turned out to have names like Arlo, Shane, Tucker, Tanner, Alex, Sam, and it took awhile to figure out who they were.