This short work is an interesting story. I rate it 5 stars because of the myriad of questions it provokes in the reader whilst entertaining him/her. The writing is simple. The ideas, complex. I can see this work used among friends to stimulate conversations as much as I can see its use in a formal classroom. Topics include G-d, religion, souls, reincarnation, redemption, punishment, racism, stereotypes & New York vs. California. I highly recommend!

But the story reads so choppy. I had trouble sometimes following what was happening and why certain sentences were being inserted. I will say that it was a very clever story and I really thought it was interesting though and hope you keep writing.

Very odd style of writing. But the story was good even with the errors.

The premise of the book- the morality of being judged on past lives- is interesting but it is poorly explored throughout the book. I didn't think the quality of writing was great and was distracted by several errors throughout.

Good read..Easy to follow. Great ending.

Not bad for a free book. It gave me something to read while at work

Very good book, reasonable length and it wasn't rushed. At one point, I didn't understand what was going on and it felt a bit rushed. Over all, I love the ending and it was a very clever and intriguing plot.

Really good

The premise has potential, but between the lack of editing, irregular font size, and cheesy dialogue, I could not even get halfway through.

Well written and thought provoking.